I recently edited (with considerable help from friends) my short fantasy fiction about a kingdom choosing its first monarch. I hope you like it!~~
This is how it all began. When first the need for a king arose, they called the bravest and the cleverest of the land to a war of wit and strength to win the crown. We know that in the end Khirm ascended the throne, but which of these courageous men was he?
I liked it a lot! I got a bit lost in the middle around when the priests showed up, but that was probably because I missed that the warriors had been given seven monkeys and not one. It took me a bit of back tracking to set myself right.
Well done! 
=D Thank you!